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faisal • 2017-04-12 16:02

Opane stoey

albert • 2017-03-13 11:01

Shyam Anna story delay akkaruth.keto.njan vaanam Adi thudangiya kalath ente vanarani aayirunnel Mariya.pinneedangott Oru oneside pranayam aayi.Innu vare kandittillelum,still I love her.Ente ee oru agraham story IL ulppeduthumo.ithiri kamathmakavum pranayathmagavum aayi.it is a humble request.

albert • 2017-03-08 06:48

Shyam Anna nammude Mariya ille,A padangalile heroine.avale premichu kettuka ennath.ente oru fantasy aarunnu.ath EE story IL sadhichutharumo.

albert • 2017-03-06 08:57

Shyam Anna replay must.pinne ente oru agraham paranjal ath EE kadhayil ulpeduthaamo.ningal aanu enne centre charector aakki story cheythath.i thankful for that.sreeja and Jaya pole ithilum dharalam part ukal venam.pinne enikk insects ishtannu but mother,sister,blood relatives ishtamalla.nammude veettilekk kettippidichu vigdunna allenkil direct blood relationship illathathupole undallo athaa thalparyam.IPO paranjal ente suggestions.ente aagraham next part IL comment cheyyam.saadhichutharum Enna vishwasathode.......albert

akh • 2017-03-05 10:38

Super.adutha bagam pettanu thane idanam .Waiting

ANU • 2017-03-05 07:34

സൂപ്പർ പക്ഷേ ഒരുപാടു ലേറ്റ് ആകുന്നു

kurumban • 2017-03-05 07:07

Kollaaaaaaaaaaaaaaam bro

nimshad • 2017-03-05 03:07

adipoli

benzY • 2017-03-05 00:46

Superb.......

vijayakumar • 2017-03-04 21:44

kidilo kidilam, next partinayee kathirikkunnu shyam

Anish • 2017-03-04 19:16

Good....

appukutttan • 2017-03-04 18:32

mass...ammede kalla kali.... dialogue

Babu • 2017-03-04 18:10

അക്ഷര തെറ്റ് വളരെ അധികം ഉണ്ട് ശ്രദ്ധിക്കണo നന്നായിട്ടുണ്ട്

albert • 2017-03-04 17:47

Adipoli.pettennu poratte next part.

ps • 2017-03-04 15:58

Pettennu poratte

സഗർ • 2017-03-04 15:26

കട്ട വേയിറ്റിങ്ങ് ഉടനേ വരിക തമസിക്കരുത്