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Navaz • 2016-07-14 07:25

adipoli

Navaz • 2016-07-14 07:24

Hiii.... ithinte 4th part etrayum petennu thanne irakanm........

Navaz • 2016-07-14 07:24

Hiii.... ithinte 4th part etrayum petennu thanne irakanm........ nalla story....... keep it up

Finu • 2016-07-08 23:25

Nalla kadha thudaranam

rose • 2016-06-18 11:11

kllam super pls cont...
first part oru vallatha nirthayi poyi masheeee...
ata eallavarum dasiya pathu.

Kannan.P • 2016-06-17 03:50

Ithu kalakkiyado masheee... Nalla narration, pinne kali kurachoodi vivaranam koduthal nannakum.

Kannan • 2016-06-17 03:32

Broo inganeyonnum konde nirthallee, ezhuthuanel muzhuvanum ezhuthanam allel ezhuthallu.

Kannan • 2016-06-17 03:19

Ningalude thudakam nannayittundu, but ivide kadhavayikunnathu nthelum oru sugam kittan vendiyallee, kurachu adhikam pagekal venam. Nice try keep it up.

kannan • 2016-06-15 22:05

Katha Kollam,
Alpm fast ayo ennu samsayam.
Thankal ethu adhym thanne 2 part onnichu publish cheythirunel ee problem varillayirunu..keep up the good work,,,, all the best

vediveeran • 2016-06-15 01:33

kutta.....kunna ketti avale panniya kariyam ezhuthu pettennu....

Paras • 2016-06-14 22:15

പൊളിച്ചു മച്ചാ പൊളിച്ചു, ബാക്കി കൂടെ പോരട്ടെ

Jose • 2016-06-14 19:55

nice story continue...

Rajun • 2016-06-14 17:08

yes thuadaranam suhruthe all the best

achu • 2016-06-14 17:01

Continu bro continu

dani • 2016-06-14 15:08

Athra poraa...  Kadha thudaratte

ഇന്ദു • 2016-06-14 14:32

അളിയാ പൊളിച്ചു ബാക്കികൂടി അങ്ങെഴുത്.വായനക്കാരുടെ മനസ്സ് നന്നായിട്ടറിയാം  കൃത്യമായ സ്ഥലത്ത് തന്നെ നിർത്തി.

Prasanth PY • 2016-06-14 13:23

nannavunnund but ezhuthunnathu crime thriller onnum allallo kurachukoode sambavangal venam

mani • 2016-06-14 11:32

Continue

jiju • 2016-06-14 10:41

Thudaranam thamasikaruth

kampi • 2016-06-14 05:38

nannavunnund. you continue